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Post by ╗ on Dec 31, 2005 23:53:25 GMT -5
3 hours left now couples will kiss, kids will play and then I am gone
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Post by ╗ on Dec 31, 2005 23:55:12 GMT -5
You don't have to wait By yourself, Just go out and Enjoy the fireworks lol. "enjoy the fireworks" = 6 syllables (at least the way I pronounce it does)
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Post by Joolie on Jan 1, 2006 9:49:08 GMT -5
Cristobal, haha.. thanks for pointing it out ============================
The New Year is here Old cherished as memories Live with a fresh start
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Post by oxstarxo on Jan 1, 2006 13:46:24 GMT -5
i hate applying to colleges, i think that it's overrated
i would rather go to a foreign country and marry someone rich
haha
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Post by ╗ on Jan 1, 2006 17:00:23 GMT -5
You missed a syllable! ("Paradise is away" = 6) Pa-ra-dise is a-way = 7 maybe I just speak funny? Pa = 1 ra = 1 dise = 1 is = 1 a = 1 way = 1 ... 1+1+1+1+1+1 = 6 Did you hide a syllable somewhere? ;D
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Post by muzo on Jan 1, 2006 18:02:19 GMT -5
^ another tibetan haiku shugu da nyugu gubja ola shadae du haiku ji jina? translation a pen and a paper are under the chair maybe i should write a haiku?
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Post by Joolie on Jan 1, 2006 18:50:02 GMT -5
It is almost Spring The snow is melting and the Sun is breaking through
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Post by muzo on Jan 1, 2006 18:52:14 GMT -5
^^err... in canada? already?
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Post by Joolie on Jan 1, 2006 22:15:19 GMT -5
I wish... snow is getting slushy now though.. it's been raining more than snowing. -------------------------------------------------------
In dark loneliness We are our pasts, nothing here. I cannot forget.
Voices transparent Sad anonymous heroes Die in vain crusades
Who roams a garden Picks green nouns and fresh bright verbs Will not force language
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Post by ╗ on Jan 1, 2006 23:55:59 GMT -5
The dorms are quiet 3 days until people move in I'm alone for now... EDIT: the halls here are dead no one is here but me. So, should I be scared now?
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Post by Joolie on Jan 2, 2006 15:58:42 GMT -5
The dorms are quiet 3 days until people move in I'm alone for now... EDIT:the halls here are dead no one is here but me. So, should I be scared now? ^^ Cristobal, your first haiku has 8 lines!! 3 days until people move in = 8 syllables
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Post by ╗ on Jan 2, 2006 17:27:01 GMT -5
8 lines?!?! Oh you mean 8 syllables. Yeah, oh...okay.
I guess we're even now. LOL. ------------------------------------
The dorms are quiet 2 days now before move-in I'm still so alone
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Post by Joolie on Jan 2, 2006 17:55:34 GMT -5
Multicultural Born and raised in Toronto My home, native land
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Post by snow2day4me on Jan 2, 2006 18:00:51 GMT -5
School starts tomorrow, But I'm not ready for it. No one gives a s***.
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Post by bulaklak on Jan 2, 2006 18:07:00 GMT -5
I thought haikus had to be about nature? oh well. Spanish!
Se me rompiĆ³ el coche en la calle no puedo volver
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