EAN's Poetry Thread!!

[rob]

This is the thread for all the budding EA poets and songwriters out there. Post away!!

PS: And no ripped off stuff. Original contributions only

Here's a sample from what I scratched on the dinner napkin tonight:

Baby, please try to forgive me
Stay here don't put out the glow
Hold me now, don't bother
If every minute it makes me weaker
You can save me from the man that I've become
Oh yeah

Lookin' back on the things I've done
I was trying to be someone
I played my part and kept you in the dark
Now let me show you the shape of my heart

[JohnnyUtah]

rob said:

This is the thread for all the budding EA poets and songwriters out there. Post away!!

PS: And no ripped off stuff. Original contributions only

Here's a sample from what I scratched on the dinner napkin tonight:

Baby, please try to forgive me
Stay here don't put out the glow
Hold me now, don't bother
If every minute it makes me weaker
You can save me from the man that I've become
Oh yeah

Lookin' back on the things I've done
I was trying to be someone
I played my part and kept you in the dark
Now let me show you the shape of my heart

I think you should set those words to music and then sing/interpretive dance it onstage with Yongfook and Hugo.

[angel]

^ I'd pay good money to see that. Well, some money anyway.